Monday, 22 November 2021

Writing - Describe what you see!

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Frances,
    I really enjoyed reading your story!
    Your story reminded me of mine!
    Next time you should try to add more describing words to it.
    How long did it take you to write this whole story?
    Blog you later!
    😃😃

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  2. HI Frances Tupou here.
    I really love the way that you said that they treated each other like sisters because even though they are not the same size. I really think that they listened to each other like there own sister. I really think that people can be friends if they are not the same size what do you think?.
    .Have a Wonderful day Frances.

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