Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work.
Our school-wide theme this year is 'In Our Backyard. Kia mau ki te tokanga nui a noho - there is no place like home.' Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work.
Kia ora Frances. You hooked me into your blog post with your awesome alliterative title. Wander is a smart name for a wandering albatross! I like the vocabulary you've used like fateful and incubated. Do you think some more full stops would make your text easier to read?
I like the descriptive language EG 1 Fateful day. I like how you use scientific words that showed you have done some research. For example incubator and poacher . I would like to know what happened to Chip chip?
Kia ora Frances. You hooked me into your blog post with your awesome alliterative title. Wander is a smart name for a wandering albatross! I like the vocabulary you've used like fateful and incubated. Do you think some more full stops would make your text easier to read?
ReplyDeleteI like the descriptive language EG 1 Fateful day.
ReplyDeleteI like how you use scientific words that showed you have done some research. For example incubator and poacher .
I would like to know what happened to Chip chip?
Kia Ora Frances
ReplyDeleteI really like your post your Title is so good how you got the information of Wanda?
Have a good day
Blog you later.
Chip chip was about to be skined and boiled alive then the poacher big bro heard the cries of the bird and nursed Chip chip back to health
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